A WALK IN THE RAIN…
The night time makes me incognito
The late hour supplying solitude from bustling crowds
The mist enveloping me in meditative shroud
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Nature’s painting everything in shades of black ‘n’ blue
I’m trudging through puddles ‘n’ muddles
Pouring rain soaking me to the bone
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The smell of wet earth invigorates my senses
The water washing away my tears ‘n’ fears
The lightning striking me with inspiration
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The thunder arouses a steely resolve
To break every shackle ‘n’ chain
No matter the hurt ‘n’ pain
…
Hold on tight, these are a slippery times
There’s no solid ground
It’s pitch black ‘n’ dark, not a star in sight
…
“No worries, move on, I got your back.”
Says a tiny voice.
“I’m a part of you, I’ll walk with you, no matter what.”
“Maybe I can’t stop the downpour, but I will always join you for a walk in the rain…”
Honest feedback and suggestions highly appreciated.Like,comment and share.
beautiful! you were missed!
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Thank you so much…so sweet…I can be present in spirit..
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Nice thoughtful write like a rain dipped thought provoking flow, keep blogging!💐
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thank you very much…glad you liked it…
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Wow! I am so using this for analysis in my next poetry class. Way to go!
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aww…thank you so much for the pat on the back…all the best for your poetry class
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Wonderfully expressd.
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thank you so much…highly appreciated
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It’s like your telling a story
You ever tried to get your work published?
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thanks for your feedback…glad you approve…I am compiling, hope to publish soon, keep me in your prayers…
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No doubt!
As long as you have faith, your poetry will take you to far places
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Thank you so much for the vote of confidence…yes I will keep the faith….
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I love rain. I really enjoy your post. 👍🏽💗💗
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me too…glad..thanks so much
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