Dear one,
I see you
Grey eyes ‘n’ solemn soul
Glistening tears
Tender hands cuffing mouth
Stifling the sobs within
A modest ‘n’ polished appearance without
…
I keep quiet
But your sobriety doesn’t fool me
…
Here’s my final parting message
You don’t need eyes to read ‘em
They’re a braille
To be felt by the soul
Awake, arise ’n’ dream no more!
Your neighbour maybe a sleepin’
His eyes closed to the truth
But it’s your time
Before taking off
From this world
Before the lights go a blinkin’
Before going one to none
Search within
Search without
Open up
Deeply reflect
Risk your heart while you’re still alive
Don’t fight it
Don’t make this mistake
Never look back
‘N’ in the hardest of times
Never fold in
Share your burdens
Trust me always
Lean on me always
Last thing
Just breathe
And…
Meet me on the other side
…
Yours truly,
Your closest Secret
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“There are two kinds of secrets. The ones we keep from others and the ones we keep from ourselves.”
― Frank Warren
Shh…
(It’s a secret…)
)Now in the open(
Honest feedback and suggestions highly appreciated. Like, comment and share.
Excellent stuff Geet 🎀 😉
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thank you so much…am encouraged and humbled…
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😊
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Mindblowing! Wonderful post! You write so well.I loved it,Geet!
Never stop writing such beautiful stuff.
Have a nice time,always!
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thank you so much for your comment…am highly encouraged…wish you good times too…
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Love how you ended this piece.
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thank you so much…glad you liked it…am encouraged…
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Amazingly penned. A profound letter which touches the heart deep. 😊
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thank you so much for your feedback…am encouraged…your comments touch my heart deep too…much appreciated…
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I’m glad to know that. Thank you. I wish you write mind blowing posts. And I hope I can keep up. 😊
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so sweet of you to say… Indeed I hope I can keep up with the demand…write on fellow blogger…
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I’m very sure you can. 😊👍🏻
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cheers to your faith in me …
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🤗😊
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Cleverly done.
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thank you so much for your feedback…
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Don’t look back indeed:)
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Yes need a constant reminder… thanks for reading and commenting…
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What a beautiful poem. The last line – meet me on the other side – so beautiful 🌸🌸
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Many thanks from this side… glad you enjoyed it..am encouraged…
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I loved it. My leashes
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Thanks again…
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🌸😊
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I wanted to say pleasure. Sorry
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No worries…
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🌸😊
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You wrote it beautifully Geet..i loved it🤗💞
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Thank you so much…am encouraged… means a lot…
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That’s really good..keep it up👍🏻
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Thanks again…
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Nice poem and photo Geet
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Thank you…yes the picture matches my post…
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Indeed and lovely Geet
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Thanks again…
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You are welcome Geet
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Love this
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Thank you so much…much appreciated…
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Last thing, just breadth and meet me on the other side… This is incredibly amazing ❤
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thank you so much…your kind comment is much appreciated…means a lot…thank you again for reading and commenting…
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My pleasure…I will be looking forward to your future writings 😊🌸🌸
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Am encouraged… thanks…feel free to peruse my blog’s older posts too… feedback highly appreciated
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I’m definitely going to read them as well. And I’m sure they would be as great as this post. Best wishes for you.
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Look forward to your visits…thanks so much… I do hope they are worth your time… best wishes to you too…
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Love the last line the most. Beautiful poem, Geet ❤
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thank you so much…much appreciated…am encouraged…
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Always a pleasure to read your words, Geet ❤
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thanks again…I shall try not to disappoint…
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You cannot ❤
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As beautiful as you ❤
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Comment as kind as you… thanks so much…
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You are most welcome :):)
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So sweet, so engulfing. Beautifully written in a very touching manner. I simply love it, Geet.💕🌷
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Thank you so much…am encouraged… humbled… touched by your comment…
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You are welcome!🌷
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My warm greetings to all the super talented,inspirational and encouraging WordPress bloggers across the globe. I humbly thank you for the mention and the challenge.
Geetika
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