Matryoshka doll

Read this [ musing ] called ‘Matryoshka doll’ by alilsong here – https://terriblytinytales.com/tale/1cmSZmdl862

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Steel

I was once raw-iron ore

Buried deep in mother’s womb

Mined ‘n’ thrust in a blast furnace

I melted ‘n’ burned

Lost all my impurities

Time cannot rust me now

None can steal my thunder

Hard, strong ‘n’ grey

I have nerves of steel

Brace yourself

Don’t mess with me.